Telechat Review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-04
review-merkle-tls-brainpool-04-genart-telechat-even-2013-10-29-00

Request Review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpool
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-08-13
Requested 2013-07-11
Authors Johannes Merkle , Manfred Lochter
I-D last updated 2015-10-14 (Latest revision 2013-07-08)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -02 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Roni Even
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Simon Josefsson (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -04 by Simon Josefsson
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-merkle-tls-brainpool by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 04
Result Ready
Completed 2013-10-29
review-merkle-tls-brainpool-04-genart-telechat-even-2013-10-29-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
receive.

Document:

draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–6–30

IETF LC End Date: 2013-7–23

IESG Telechat date:



Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC

.





Major issues:



Minor issues:



In section 1 you reference TLS 1.0 and 1.1 usage based on RFC 4492.

What about TLS 1.2 usage specified in RFC5246 A.7







Nits/editorial comments:

In section 3 the  registry name is EC Named Curve

In section 3 change “suitability” to “suitable”