Last Call Review of draft-murchison-webdav-prefer-13
review-murchison-webdav-prefer-13-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-13-00
Request | Review of | draft-murchison-webdav-prefer |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 14) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2017-01-16 | |
Requested | 2016-12-19 | |
Authors | Kenneth Murchison | |
I-D last updated | 2017-01-13 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -11
by Stewart Bryant
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Hannes Tschofenig Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Al Morton (diff) Genart Last Call review of -13 by Stewart Bryant (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Stewart Bryant |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-murchison-webdav-prefer by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 13 (document currently at 14) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2017-01-13 |
review-murchison-webdav-prefer-13-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-13-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-murchison-webdav-prefer-13 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 13 Jan 2016 IETF LC End Date: 16 January 2017 IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2017 Summary: Ready with nits This is a well written document with two minor editorial issues remaining from the version previously reviewed. Issues: From ID-nits: -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC7240, but the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should. Specifically I think the nits checker is looking to see RFC724O called up in the Abstract. ========= It says in section 5 5. Implementation Status < RFC Editor: before publication please remove this section, the reference to [RFC7942], and any "URIs" section > I think you ned the whole of section 9.3 to be deleted. If that is so it would be clearer to the editor to say so.