Last Call Review of draft-murchison-webdav-prefer-13
review-murchison-webdav-prefer-13-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-13-00

Request Review of draft-murchison-webdav-prefer
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-01-16
Requested 2016-12-19
Authors Kenneth Murchison
Draft last updated 2017-01-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Hannes Tschofenig
Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Al Morton (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant 
State Completed
Review review-murchison-webdav-prefer-13-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-13
Reviewed rev. 13 (document currently at 14)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2017-01-13

Review
review-murchison-webdav-prefer-13-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-13

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Document: draft-murchison-webdav-prefer-13
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 13 Jan 2016
IETF LC End Date: 16 January 2017
IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2017


Summary: Ready with nits

This is a well written document with two minor editorial issues 
remaining from the version previously reviewed.


Issues:

 From ID-nits:

   -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC7240,
      but the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.

   Specifically I think the nits checker is looking to see RFC724O
   called up in the Abstract.



=========
It says in section 5

5.  Implementation Status

    < RFC Editor: before publication please remove this section, the
    reference to [RFC7942], and any "URIs" section >

I think you ned the whole of section 9.3 to be deleted. If that is so
it would be clearer to the editor to say so.