OAuth 2.0 Mutual-TLS Client Authentication and Certificate-Bound Access Tokens
draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-17

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 15 and is now closed.

Roman Danyliw Yes

Ignas Bagdonas No Objection

Deborah Brungard No Objection

Alissa Cooper No Objection

Comment (2019-08-21 for -16)
I did not review this document myself but I'm ballot based on the Gen-ART review.

Benjamin Kaduk (was Discuss) No Objection

Comment (2019-08-23)
Thank you for addressing my Discuss (and Comment!) points!

Suresh Krishnan No Objection

Comment (2019-08-20 for -16)
* Section 2.1.2.

Suggest using the IPv6 Address Text Representation described in RFC5952 instead of using the representations described in RFC4291 section 2.2. The canonical representation described in RFC5952 makes it easier to compare two IPv6 address strings which is probably something you want to do while doing mutual authentication.

Warren Kumari No Objection

Comment (2019-08-21 for -16)
Thank you for a very readable document -- I'd put off reading this because I'd assumed it was going to be really hard to follow if you are not an expert in this art, but was pleasantly surprised at how approachable it is.

Mirja Kühlewind No Objection

Barry Leiba No Objection

Alexey Melnikov No Objection

Alvaro Retana No Objection

Adam Roach No Objection

Comment (2019-08-19 for -16)
Thanks for the work that everyone did on this document. I have one suggestion
for clarification, followed by a handful of editorial nits.

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§2.1.2:

>  tls_client_auth_san_ip
>     A string representation of an IP address in either dotted decimal
>     notation (for IPv4) or colon-delimited hexadecimal (for IPv6, as
>     defined in [RFC4291] section 2.2) that is expected to be present
>     as an iPAddress SAN entry in the certificate, which the OAuth
>     client will use in mutual TLS authentication.

This probably needs some text that clarifies expectations around comparison
and/or normalization. For example, if the iPAddress value in the cert is
"20 01 0d b8 00 00 00 00 00 00 00 00 c0 00 02 ca" (and a mask of all F's), one
should presume that this would match both tls_client_auth_san_ip values
"2001:db8:0:0:0:0:c000:2ca" and "2001:DB8::192.0.2.202", right? If no, then
this document needs to talk about normalization of address representation.


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§1:

>  Layering on the abstract flow above, this document standardizes
>  enhanced security options for OAuth 2.0 utilizing client certificate
>  based mutual TLS.

Nit: "client-certificate-based"

>  OAuth 2.0 defines a shared secret method of client authentication but

Nit: "shared-secret"

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§1:

>  This document describes an additional
>  mechanism of client authentication utilizing mutual TLS certificate-
>  based authentication

Nit: "mutual-TLS"

>  Mutual TLS certificate-bound access tokens ensure that only the party

Nit: "Mutual-TLS"

>  Mutual TLS certificate-bound access tokens and mutual TLS client

Nit: "Mutual-TLS... mutual-TLS"

>  Additional client metadata parameters are introduced by this document
>  in support of certificate-bound access tokens and mutual TLS client
>  authentication.

Nit: "mutual-TLS"

The remainder of the document has several other uses of the phrase "mutual
TLS" as an adjective; they should be similarly hyphenated. I will not call
them out individually. (Non-adjectival uses should not contain hyphens, so
this isn't a simple find-and-replace operation.)

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§5:

>  Authorization servers supporting both clients using mutual TLS and
>  conventional clients MAY chose to isolate the server side mutual TLS
>  behaviour to only clients intending to do mutual TLS, thus avoiding

Nit: "behavior" (or adjust other spellings in the document to be consistently
British).

Martin Vigoureux No Objection

Éric Vyncke No Objection

Comment (2019-08-22 for -16)
Thank you for the hard work put into this extensive document. 

I second Suresh's COMMENT about IPv6 address representation.

Regards,

-éric