Early Review of draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04
review-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04-opsdir-early-hares-2013-12-19-00
| Request | Review of | draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2013-12-19 | |
| Requested | 2013-12-19 | |
| Authors | Paul Hethmon , Robert McMurray | |
| I-D last updated | 2013-12-19 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Opsdir Early review of -04 by Susan Hares (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Susan Hares |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Early review on draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2013-12-19 |
review-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04-opsdir-early-hares-2013-12-19-00
Resending to ops-dir. From: Susan Hares [mailto:shares at ndzh.com] Sent: Wednesday, December 18, 2013 6:57 PM To: 'draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts at tools.ietf.org' Cc: 'draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts at tools.ietf.org' Subject: draft-hetmon-mcmuraay-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04 Ops-dir and authors: This is an ops-dir review of your document. I am your designated reviewer. Reviewer: Susan Hares ( shares at ndzh.com ) Status: Ready for publication Editorial Comments: Excellently written. English is clear. State diagrams consistent, and appendices provide useful alternatives so that developers can aid. Technical comments: For this technology one can only say Wonderful! At last we get rid of some of the ftp limitations. IANA section: Clear and provides good context for IANA. Sue Hares shares at ndzh.com