Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-

Request Review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-04-05
Requested 2012-03-22
Authors Nabil Bitar, Sanjay Wadhwa, Thomas Haag, Li Hongyu
Draft last updated 2012-04-05
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Roni Even
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Tsvdir Early review of -?? by Allison Mankin
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ancp-pon-genart-lc-even-2012-04-05
Review completed: 2012-04-05


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Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2012–4–1

IETF LC End Date: 2012–3–30

IESG Telechat date:


Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational 




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Nits/editorial comments:


In section 4 ”

However, the broadcast capability on the PON enables the AN (OLT) to send one copy on the PON as opposed to N  copies of a multicast channel on the PON serving N premises being  receivers” I think the “being” before the last word should be deleted


General editorial comment is about page breaks which can be better like section 7 title is at the end of a page and the text is in the next page. Also some of the figures and their descriptions are split between pages.