Early Review of draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13
review-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13-secdir-early-xia-2018-02-23-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13 |
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Requested revision | 13 (document currently at 30) | |
Type | Early Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2018-02-25 | |
Requested | 2018-02-11 | |
Requested by | Terry Manderson | |
Authors | Toerless Eckert , Michael H. Behringer , Steinthor Bjarnason | |
I-D last updated | 2018-02-23 | |
Completed reviews |
Secdir Early review of -13
by Liang Xia
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Iotdir Early review of -18 by Pascal Thubert (diff) Rtgdir Telechat review of -13 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) Genart Last Call review of -13 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) Genart Telechat review of -16 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -16 by Liang Xia (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -24 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Liang Xia |
State | Completed | |
Request | Early review on draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 13 (document currently at 30) | |
Result | Has issues | |
Completed | 2018-02-23 |
review-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13-secdir-early-xia-2018-02-23-00
In general, this document is well-written and considers security issues carefully throughout the whole architecture. nits: Abstract: /or not misconfigured/or misconfigured/ the fifth paragraph of section 6.1: the last ")" is redundant, therefore can be deleted some section titles don't comply the rule of starting from a capital letter section 6.5 /("IP security", see [RFC4301] and "Internet Key Exchange protocol version 2", see [RFC7296]/("IP security", see [RFC4301] and "Internet Key Exchange protocol version 2", see [RFC7296])/ suggestion: all the Figures (e.g., Figure 1,2...) should have a title for explanation section 2, please update the last paragraph to reference RFC8174 to indicate that lowercase versions of the keywords are not normative Section 11 (Security Considerations) Since section 9.2 has described the self-protection properties of ACP well, it may be useful in this section to mention them as a whole.