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Early Review of draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13
review-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13-secdir-early-xia-2018-02-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13
Requested revision 13 (document currently at 30)
Type Early Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2018-02-25
Requested 2018-02-11
Requested by Terry Manderson
Authors Toerless Eckert , Michael H. Behringer , Steinthor Bjarnason
Draft last updated 2018-02-23
Completed reviews Secdir Early review of -13 by Liang Xia (diff)
Iotdir Early review of -18 by Pascal Thubert (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -13 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -16 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -16 by Liang Xia (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -24 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Liang Xia
State Completed
Review review-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13-secdir-early-xia-2018-02-23
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 30)
Result Has Issues
Completed 2018-02-23
review-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13-secdir-early-xia-2018-02-23-00
In general, this document is well-written and considers security issues
carefully throughout the whole architecture.

nits:
Abstract: /or not misconfigured/or misconfigured/

the fifth paragraph of section 6.1: the last ")" is redundant, therefore can be
deleted

some section titles don't comply the rule of starting from a capital letter

section 6.5
/("IP security", see [RFC4301] and "Internet Key Exchange protocol version 2",
see [RFC7296]/("IP security", see [RFC4301] and "Internet Key Exchange protocol
version 2", see [RFC7296])/

suggestion:
all the Figures (e.g., Figure 1,2...) should have a title for explanation

section 2, please update the last paragraph to reference RFC8174 to indicate
that lowercase versions of the keywords are not normative

Section 11 (Security Considerations) Since section 9.2 has described the
self-protection properties of ACP well, it may be useful in this section to
mention them as a whole.