Early Review of draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13
review-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13-secdir-early-xia-2018-02-23-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13 |
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Requested rev. | 13 (document currently at 30) | |
Type | Early Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2018-02-25 | |
Requested | 2018-02-11 | |
Requested by | Terry Manderson | |
Authors | Toerless Eckert, Michael Behringer, Steinthor Bjarnason | |
Draft last updated | 2018-02-23 | |
Completed reviews |
Secdir Early review of -13 by Liang Xia
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Iotdir Early review of -18 by Pascal Thubert (diff) Rtgdir Telechat review of -13 by Joel Halpern (diff) Genart Last Call review of -13 by Elwyn Davies (diff) Genart Telechat review of -16 by Elwyn Davies (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -16 by Liang Xia (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -24 by Joel Halpern (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Liang Xia |
State | Completed | |
Review | review-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13-secdir-early-xia-2018-02-23 | |
Reviewed rev. | 13 (document currently at 30) | |
Review result | Has Issues | |
Review completed: | 2018-02-23 |
Review
review-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13-secdir-early-xia-2018-02-23
In general, this document is well-written and considers security issues carefully throughout the whole architecture. nits: Abstract: /or not misconfigured/or misconfigured/ the fifth paragraph of section 6.1: the last ")" is redundant, therefore can be deleted some section titles don't comply the rule of starting from a capital letter section 6.5 /("IP security", see [RFC4301] and "Internet Key Exchange protocol version 2", see [RFC7296]/("IP security", see [RFC4301] and "Internet Key Exchange protocol version 2", see [RFC7296])/ suggestion: all the Figures (e.g., Figure 1,2...) should have a title for explanation section 2, please update the last paragraph to reference RFC8174 to indicate that lowercase versions of the keywords are not normative Section 11 (Security Considerations) Since section 9.2 has described the self-protection properties of ACP well, it may be useful in this section to mention them as a whole.