Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-leap-second-06
review-ietf-avtcore-leap-second-06-genart-lc-campbell-2013-12-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-leap-second
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-12-09
Requested 2013-11-25
Draft last updated 2013-12-07
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell
State Completed
Review review-ietf-avtcore-leap-second-06-genart-lc-campbell-2013-12-07
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-12-07

Review
review-ietf-avtcore-leap-second-06-genart-lc-campbell-2013-12-07

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Document:  
draft-ietf-avtcore-leap-second-06
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-12-6
IETF LC End Date: 2013-12-9

Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a standards track RFC

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- 3.3, last paragraph:

should "second" be "seconds"?

-- 5, last paragraph: "the a warping technique" 

extra article.

-- 5.1, title:

Should that say _RTCP_ Sender Reports?