Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-10
review-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-10-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2015-03-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-03-18
Requested 2015-03-11
Authors Greg M. Bernstein , Sugang Xu , Young Lee , Giovanni Martinelli , Hiroaki Harai
I-D last updated 2015-11-18 (Latest revision 2015-05-18)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Francis Dupont
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Benjamin Kaduk (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tim Wicinski
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 12)
Result Has nits
Completed 2015-03-21
review-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-10-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2015-03-21-00





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Revision reviewed: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-10
      


      Summary: Ready with nits and notes.
      


      ID Nits: Has Nits
      


      Note: There is IPR. 


        Intended status: Standards Track







I've read the document and I think it is ready for
      proceeding. I have some minor editorial comments which I 




will pass along to the authors.







Nits: 







 -- The draft header indicates that this document updates
      RFC6205, but the




     abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it
      should.







== Outdated reference: draft-ietf-ccamp-rwa-info has been
      published as RFC




     7446







Reference Comment:







Under Informative References RFC6163 is listed as 


          "work in progress:
      draft-bernstein-ccamp-wavelength-switched-03.txt, February 2008"







It's t

he only RFC reference that looks off.