Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-12
review-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-12-genart-telechat-dupont-2015-06-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-05-26
Requested 2015-05-20
Authors Greg M. Bernstein , Sugang Xu , Young Lee , Giovanni Martinelli , Hiroaki Harai
I-D last updated 2015-11-18 (Latest revision 2015-05-18)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Francis Dupont
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Benjamin Kaduk (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 12
Result Ready
Completed 2015-06-03
review-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-12-genart-telechat-dupont-2015-06-03-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150313
IETF LC End Date: 20150318
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 I read the 09 version but was too busy to prepare the IETF meeting
to send these few comments. Note I know the 10 version is available
so I adjusted by comments (i.e., I don't raise concerns about removed
or improved texts :-).

 - 2 page 4 (end node): e.g. -> e.g.,

(it seems the very few other comments no longer apply! :-)

Thanks 

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr