Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-observe-14
review-ietf-core-observe-14-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-08-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-core-observe
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-08-19
Requested 2014-07-31
Other Reviews Genart Telechat review of -14 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Dorothy Gellert (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
Review review-ietf-core-observe-14-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-08-11
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg10474.html
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2014-08-11
Review completed: 2014-08-11

Review
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Document: draft-ietf-core-observe-14




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2014-08-08




IETF LC End Date:   2014-08-08




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC.




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 12], "entry with with"--typo-->"entry with"




-[Page 13], "when the the age"--typo-->"when the age"




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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