Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06
review-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06-opsdir-lc-romascanu-2020-09-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2020-09-10
Requested 2020-08-27
Authors Balazs Varga, János Farkas, Lou Berger, Andy Malis, Stewart Bryant
Draft last updated 2020-09-03
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Harish Sitaraman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -06 by Joerg Ott (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06-opsdir-lc-romascanu-2020-09-03
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/RB0vNBDD2n6Gy8HHhphm5OMZLGI
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-09-03

Review
review-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06-opsdir-lc-romascanu-2020-09-03

This is the OPS-DIR review for draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06. This review is written to assist the OPS ADs to formulate their position in the IESG approval process. 

This document specifies use of the MPLS DetNet encapsulation over an IP network.  The approach is modeled on the operation of MPLS over an IP Packet Switched Network (PSN).  It maps the MPLS data plane encapsulation described in [I-D.ietf-detnet-mpls] to the DetNet IP data plane defined in [I-D.ietf-detnet-ip]. 

The document is clear and well-written. Section 5 (Management and Control Information Summary) summarizes the configuration information required in order to activate this DetNet mapping. Besides configuration no other management or operations information is mentioned. It is not clear if there are no other management or OAM information that should be considered, reviewing this once more is recommended. 

With the only observation about, this document is READY for publication.