Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03
review-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-12-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-12-02
Requested 2019-11-18
Authors Tim Wicinski
I-D last updated 2021-07-23 (Latest revision 2021-03-09)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -03 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -03 by Brian Trammell (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -04 by Jean-Michel Combes (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/RQyIwUyCT9jM2vUrQYqALUOOIwI
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready w/issues
Completed 2019-12-04
review-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-12-04-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2019-12-02
IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC with some
issues (I would recommend taking into consideration the comments received on
the mailing list)

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
It would have been interesting to have this draft also mention the
additional/potential risks for non-web applications. IoT was briefly mentioned
in Section 3.6. What about other applications? Is there any other privacy risks
beyond just identifying the content being requested?

Very interesting topic.

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
Research
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