Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-04
review-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-04-rtgdir-early-hopps-2019-09-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2019-09-25
Requested 2019-09-11
Requested by Susan Hares
Authors Job Snijders , Jakob Heitz , John Scudder , Alexander Azimov
I-D last updated 2019-09-25
Completed reviews Opsdir Early review of -04 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Christian Hopps (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Dale R. Worley (diff)
Comments 
Second request with more data 
The ID NIT Regarding this draft that states the text below is on the 
BCP 78 rights for RFC 4486.   These have been granted and confirmed 
during the RFC8203 discussion.   The reviewers can ignore this point. 

    The document seems to lack a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but may
     have content which was first submitted before 10 November 2008.  If you
     have contacted all the original authors and they are all willing to grant
     the BCP78 rights to the IETF Trust, then this is fine, and you can ignore
     this comment.  If not, you may need to add the pre-RFC5378 disclaimer. 
     (See the Legal Provisions document at
     https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info for more information.)
Assignment Reviewer Christian Hopps
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/_Kbi6K1m-3j5YgGbMf6658tE2Gw
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-09-25
review-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-04-rtgdir-early-hopps-2019-09-25-00
Hello,

I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis/

The routing directorate will, on request from the working group chair, perform
an “early” review of a draft before it is submitted for publication to the
IESG. The early review can be performed at any time during the draft’s lifetime
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stage that the document has reached. As this document is in working group last
call, my focus for the review was to determine whether the document is ready to
be published. Please consider my comments along with the other working group
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Document: draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-04
Reviewer: Christian Hopps
Review Date: 9/25/2019
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary:

- No issues found. This documents is ready to proceed to the IESG.

Comments:

- This is a minor update (increasing the valid length fields values by 1 bit)
  to the functionality in RFC 8203 that seems well justified by the new
  Appendix B.

- The field name "Error Code" changed from RFC 8203 to "Error code" which
  seems to be a superfluous diff. If so, I suggest reverting it if the
  opportunity presents itself during final editing. I don't think it warrants a
  new version of the document though.