Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-06
review-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-06-rtgdir-lc-jia-2024-08-29-00

Hello,

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Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-06
Reviewer: Jia He
Review Date: August 8, 2024
IETF LC End Date: date-if-known
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary:
This document is one of the four drafts which define the DLEP extensions to
support credit window based flow control scheme. It is basically ready for
publication but has nits that should be considered prior to publication.

No major issues found.

No minor issues found.

Nits:
1、Section 1, s/a 3 bit "PCP" field/a 3-bit "PCP" field, s/a 12 bit VLAN
identifier (VID) field/a 12-bit VLAN identifier (VID) field 2、Replace the
out-of-date references to "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-12",
"draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-09", and
"draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-14" with the latest version.

B.R.
Jia

-----邮件原件-----
发件人: Daniam Henriques via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
发送时间: 2024年6月29日 16:03
收件人: Hejia (Jia) <hejia@huawei.com>
抄送: Daniam.Henriques@liquid.tech; Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>
主题: For He Jia, Rtgdir Last Call review by 2024-08-08 assigned:
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension

Last Call review of: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension (no specific
version) Deadline: 2024-08-08 Pages: 7 Requested by: Jim Guichard

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Daniam Henriques has assigned He Jia as a reviewer for this document.