Early Review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09
review-ietf-mls-architecture-09-genart-early-shirazipour-2022-09-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Early Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-09-28
Requested 2022-09-21
Requested by Paul Wouters
Authors Benjamin Beurdouche , Eric Rescorla , Emad Omara , Srinivas Inguva , Alan Duric
I-D last updated 2022-09-29
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -13 by Valery Smyslov
Secdir Early review of -09 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Genart Early review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -09 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Artart Early review of -09 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -10 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -10 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -10 by David C Lawrence (diff)
Comments 
It would be nice if we could get a few early reviews in time for the MLS interim meeting on the 29th
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-mls-architecture by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/M8UxyeH75I3l0lYx6DKtgipwPF0
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 13)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2022-09-29
review-ietf-mls-architecture-09-genart-early-shirazipour-2022-09-29-00
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Document: draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2022-09-29
IETF LC End Date: 2022-09-28
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, no other
comment than those on the list.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

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