Early Review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09
I have been assigned to review this document on behalf of the OPS DIR. I feel the document is ready with Nits. The document is well written, though I found a few gramatical issues I can share with the authors. The architecture is described in detail, and does discuss the operational requirements of deploying this. However, the document does not mention if there has been any implementations built. From an operational point of view, that would be useful in determining functionality.