Early Review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09
review-ietf-mls-architecture-09-opsdir-early-wicinski-2022-10-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2022-09-28
Requested 2022-09-21
Requested by Paul Wouters
Authors Benjamin Beurdouche , Eric Rescorla , Emad Omara , Srinivas Inguva , Alan Duric
I-D last updated 2022-10-01
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -13 by Valery Smyslov
Secdir Early review of -09 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Genart Early review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -09 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Artart Early review of -09 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -10 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -10 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -10 by David C Lawrence (diff)
Comments 
It would be nice if we could get a few early reviews in time for the MLS interim meeting on the 29th
Assignment Reviewer Tim Wicinski
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-mls-architecture by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/mW2oKdVbfgk1--zOHGTnLuAvspc
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 13)
Result Has nits
Completed 2022-10-01
review-ietf-mls-architecture-09-opsdir-early-wicinski-2022-10-01-00
I have been assigned to review this document on behalf of the OPS DIR.

I feel the document is ready with Nits. 

The document is well written, though I found a few gramatical issues I can share
with the authors. 

The architecture is described in detail, and does discuss the operational
requirements of deploying this.  However, the document does not mention
if there has been any implementations built.  From an operational point of view, 
that would be useful in determining functionality.