Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-applicability-label-adv-02
review-ietf-mpls-ldp-applicability-label-adv-02-genart-lc-romascanu-2014-02-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-applicability-label-adv
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-02-24
Requested 2014-02-13
Draft last updated 2014-02-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Dan Romascanu
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Magnus Nystrom (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-ldp-applicability-label-adv-02-genart-lc-romascanu-2014-02-24
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2014-02-24

Review
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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-applicability-label-adv-02




Reviewer: Dan Romascanu




Review Date: 2/24/14




IETF LC End Date: 2/24/14




IESG Telechat date: 




 




Summary: ready with minor issues




 




Major issues:




 




Minor issues:




 




In the table in 2.2 – the RFC column points to RFC 5036 for the first two entries. Actually RFC 5036 defines only the range for LDP FEC types, but says nothing about the values. The right information seems to be ‘xxxx (this RFC)’ or
 ‘5036 and xxxx (this RFC)’




 




Nits/editorial comments:




 




Some acronyms are not expanded at first occurrence – FEC, LSR





 




 




Regards,




 




Dan