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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-client-server-37
review-ietf-netconf-netconf-client-server-37-opsdir-lc-chown-2024-10-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-client-server-37
Requested revision 37 (document currently at 38)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-08-30
Requested 2024-08-15
Requested by Mahesh Jethanandani
Authors Kent Watsen
I-D last updated 2024-10-03
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -04 by Andy Bierman (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -37 by Daniel Migault (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -37 by Andy Bierman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -37 by Tim Chown (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -37 by Lars Eggert (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -37 by Ines Robles (diff)
Comments
This document was meant to be a part of a cluster of 9 documents, 7 of which form the "stack" of groupings used by this draft. Those "stack" groupings roughly map to the different layers of the OSI 7 layer stack, with this draft coming in at the application layer. References to those documents can be found in the document.
Assignment Reviewer Tim Chown
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-client-server by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/OugTzl4zg20QMjwUu5AGJee002o
Reviewed revision 37 (document currently at 38)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-10-03
review-ietf-netconf-netconf-client-server-37-opsdir-lc-chown-2024-10-03-00
Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The draft defines two YANG modules, one module to configure a NETCONF client
and the other module to configure a NETCONF server, where both modules support
both the SSH and TLS transport protocols.

Status: Ready for publication

I am not a YANG expert, and thus trust the positive review of the "YANG doctor"
on that aspect, but the rest of the document, and its purpose, seems both good
and useful. It appears to be ready for publication.

Best wishes,
Tim