Last Call Review of draft-ietf-raw-technologies-10
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Request Review of draft-ietf-raw-technologies
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2024-09-18
Requested 2024-09-04
Authors Pascal Thubert , Dave Cavalcanti , Xavier Vilajosana , Corinna Schmitt , János Farkas
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Assignment Reviewer Jiankang Yao
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Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 17)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2024-09-10
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Document: draft-ietf-raw-technologies-10
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review Date: 2024-09-10

Summary: Almost Ready for publication.

This document presents a series of recent reliable and available wireless
technology evolutions. It is very useful. The document is very long, and there
still have some nits. It needs further improvments.

One suggestion:

Every section in sections 4, 5, 6 and 7 has the subsection"summary".

How about adding a new section "summary" which tries to summarize all sections
from 4 to 7?

Best Regards
Jiankang Yao