Early Review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-04
review-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-04-rtgdir-early-pignataro-2017-03-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2017-03-21
Requested 2017-03-06
Requested by Susan Hares
Authors Mingui Zhang , Santosh Pallagatti , Vengada Prasad Govindan
I-D last updated 2019-04-25 (Latest revision 2018-02-06)
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Comments 
This draft has not had a QA review, and it has passed WG LC.   Please do a QA/WG LC review.
Assignment Reviewer Carlos Pignataro
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 09)
Result Has nits
Completed 2017-03-23
review-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-04-rtgdir-early-pignataro-2017-03-23-00
Hi,

This is a short yet well written document. Looks really good. Just a couple of
small questions/comments:

1. It's not clear exactly what from RFC 7175 is being updated by Section 4.
This is based on the last paragraph of the Intro, yet Section 5 also seems
relevant to that update. 2. In the IANA COnsiderations, it would be useful to
explicitly list that the "RBridge Channel Protocols" registry is part of the
"Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links (TRILL) Parameters"

Thanks,

Carlos Pignataro.