Last Call Review of draft-laurie-pki-sunlight-05

Request Review of draft-laurie-pki-sunlight
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-24
Requested 2012-12-27
Authors Ben Laurie, Adam Langley, Emilia Kasper
Draft last updated 2013-01-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Jeffrey Hutzelman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont 
State Completed
Review review-laurie-pki-sunlight-05-genart-lc-dupont-2013-01-28
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 12)
Review result Not Ready
Review completed: 2013-01-28


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Document: draft-laurie-pki-sunlight-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 201301xx
IETF LC End Date: 20130124
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Not Ready

Major issues: None but according to LC comments in the IETF mailing list
I believe a new version is very likely, so I propose to wait for it
and review only the new/next version (if you disagree please answer,
I have still the printed version 05 available and plenty of time next


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