Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-16
review-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-16-intdir-telechat-zuniga-2023-10-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 23)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2023-10-01
Requested 2023-09-25
Requested by Éric Vyncke
Authors Linda Dunbar , Ali Sajassi , John Drake , Basil Najem , Susan Hares
I-D last updated 2023-10-05
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -19 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -20 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -16 by Juan-Carlos Zúñiga (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -15 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Shuping Peng (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Juan-Carlos Zúñiga
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/2-k4Je9Jic6S4hRZJvAlVAdZTZo
Reviewed revision 16 (document currently at 23)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-10-05
review-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-16-intdir-telechat-zuniga-2023-10-05-00
Reviewer: Juan Carlos Zuniga
Review result: Ready

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for
draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage. These comments were written primarily
for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and
shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments
from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last
Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate,
see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/.

Major Issues:

Minor Issues:

Nits:

Since the required references and descriptions mentioned by Dan and others have
already been addressed in the latest version, I don't have any further comments.

General:

The WG State seems to be out of date.