Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-16
review-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-16-genart-telechat-dupont-2018-09-12-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 38) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-09-11 | |
| Requested | 2018-08-28 | |
| Authors | Dino Farinacci , Vince Fuller , David Meyer , Darrel Lewis , Albert Cabellos-Aparicio | |
| I-D last updated | 2018-09-12 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -14
by John Drake
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Kyle Rose (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -16 by Scott O. Bradner (diff) Tsvart Last Call review of -15 by Brian Trammell (diff) Genart Telechat review of -16 by Francis Dupont (diff) Tsvart Telechat review of -19 by Brian Trammell (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -18 by Kyle Rose (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 16 (document currently at 38) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2018-09-12 |
review-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-16-genart-telechat-dupont-2018-09-12-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-?? Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2018-09-12 IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-29 IESG Telechat date: 2018-09-27 Summary: Ready with Nits Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I have a few concerns about wording (e.g. things too hard to understand). I'll send a more complete message before the end of the week in the case they are not solved in version 17 I didn't read yet.