Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-20
review-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-20-opsdir-lc-wu-2024-02-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 26)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-02-12
Requested 2024-01-29
Authors Kent Watsen , Michael Scharf
I-D last updated 2024-10-10 (Latest revision 2024-04-04)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -21 by Mallory Knodel (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -21 by Nancy Cam-Winget (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -20 by Bo Wu (diff)
Yangdoctors IETF Last Call review of -09 by Ladislav Lhotka (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -21 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Bo Wu
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/lbIS0KVkWN5KRdeWLuaV6vkyxtQ
Reviewed revision 20 (document currently at 26)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-02-08
review-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-20-opsdir-lc-wu-2024-02-08-00
Hi all,

This document defines three YANG grouping modules for the configuration of TCP
clients and TCP servers. The document is well written and I think it is ready
for publication. I have two minor comments below for reference.

1. Change the YANG Copyright date in the three YANG modules to 2024.
2. For section 2.1.4, section 3.1.3, section 4.1.3 Protocol-accessible Nodes,
perhaps a reference of draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp can be added as an example?

Thanks,
Bo Wu