Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-21
review-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-21-genart-lc-knodel-2024-02-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 26)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-02-12
Requested 2024-01-29
Authors Kent Watsen , Michael Scharf
I-D last updated 2024-02-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -21 by Mallory Knodel (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -21 by Nancy Cam-Winget (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -20 by Bo Wu (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -09 by Ladislav Lhotka (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -21 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mallory Knodel
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/nB4bTcBf6CUs2kd3tIxAlniidJo
Reviewed revision 21 (document currently at 26)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-02-13
review-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-21-genart-lc-knodel-2024-02-13-00
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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-??
Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review Date: 2024-02-13
IETF LC End Date: 2024-02-12
IESG Telechat date: 2024-02-29

Summary: The draft is ready with one minor issue and nits.

Minor issue: The section 2.1.5. Guidelines for Configuring TCP Keep-Alives
would seem to apply to all three modules though it is only elaborated in the
first, which of course will be helpful to the following two but wondering if
there is somehow a way to internally reference this section such that the
reader looks to those guidelines no matter which of the three modules they are
reading about.

Nits/editorial comments:

 * Section 1.1. The first sentence should state "The document presents three..."
 * Section 3.1.2.1. The last sentence should state "...an IPv4 address, an IPv6
 address, or a hostname." *