Early Review of draft-ietf-nmop-terminology-07
review-ietf-nmop-terminology-07-rtgdir-early-bryant-2024-11-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nmop-terminology
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2024-11-22
Requested 2024-10-18
Requested by Mohamed Boucadair
Authors Nigel Davis , Adrian Farrel , Thomas Graf , Qin Wu , Chaode Yu
I-D last updated 2024-11-12
Completed reviews Secdir Early review of -07 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Genart Early review of -07 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -07 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Iotdir Early review of -07 by Carsten Bormann (diff)
Intdir Early review of -07 by Dirk Von Hugo (diff)
Comments 
The document establishes foundational terms and concepts for anomaly, incident, and fault management. Coining carefully these terms is thus important for adoption within the IETF at large (but also in discussion with other SDOs). Some of these terms may have more contextualized meaning in areas such as "incident" in security. 

We do appreciate your review on the scope, clarity, articulation of various concepts in the document. Of course, the WG and the authors welcome other comments specific to your area.
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-nmop-terminology by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/et5XmYKVQ-87fstTO0SZ6mVZAHs
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-11-12
review-ietf-nmop-terminology-07-rtgdir-early-bryant-2024-11-12-00
Summary: A well written, concise and useful document that is ready for publication.

Figure 6 was an interesting way of explaining the linkage between events, state and time.

There were no issues either minor or major.

There was one nit:

195	      used to support the delivery of some function.  Such function can
196	      be local (e.g., within a node) or distributed (e.g., at the level
197	      of a network).

Should be such a function or such functions
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