Early Review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-07
review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-07-intdir-early-thaler-2018-06-14-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
Type | Early Review | |
Team | Internet Area Directorate (intdir) | |
Deadline | 2018-06-22 | |
Requested | 2018-06-08 | |
Requested by | Suresh Krishnan | |
Authors | Yuanlong Jiang , Xian Liu , Jinchun Xu , Rodney Cummings | |
I-D last updated | 2018-06-14 | |
Completed reviews |
Intdir Early review of -07
by Dave Thaler
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Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Sheng Jiang (diff) Genart Last Call review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Samuel Weiler (diff) Genart Telechat review of -10 by Linda Dunbar (diff) Yangdoctors Early review of -10 by Radek Krejčí (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Dave Thaler |
State | Completed | |
Request | Early review on draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang by Internet Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 11) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2018-06-14 |
review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-07-intdir-early-thaler-2018-06-14-00
I have reviewed draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-07 as assigned int-dir reviewer. The draft was readable and technically good (though I am not an expert on either YANG or IEEE 1588-2008. I do have a number of nits indicated in the marked up copy at https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/research/uploads/prod/2018/06/draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-07.pdf The most notable piece of feedback is that it's not clear what the units are for several integer objects. Dave