Last Call Review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12
review-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12-dnsdir-lc-rose-2023-09-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team DNS Directorate (dnsdir)
Deadline 2023-10-06
Requested 2023-09-22
Authors Jingxuan Zhang , Dhruv Dhody , Kai Gao , Roland Schott , Qiufang Ma
I-D last updated 2023-09-26
Completed reviews Dnsdir Last Call review of -12 by Scott Rose (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Rich Salz (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -14 by Scott Rose (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -15 by Ted Lemon (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -06 by Andy Bierman (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -06 by Spencer Dawkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Scott Rose
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang by DNS Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/3umsaQ59tIHzLCrPITjgMP4O0Vo
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-09-26
review-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12-dnsdir-lc-rose-2023-09-26-00
The draft describes a yang model for provisioning NAPTR RRs (and queries) for
ALTO servers in the DNS reverse tree. This draft does not alter the DNS
protocol or defined use of NAPTR RRs for this purpose. That is defined in other
RFCs.

There is one misspelled word in section 5.3.1.3 (last paragraph): "sugested"
should be "suggested". There may be other editorial nits but they are likely
minor.