Last Call Review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12
review-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12-genart-lc-romascanu-2023-10-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-10-06
Requested 2023-09-22
Authors Jingxuan Zhang , Dhruv Dhody , Kai Gao , Roland Schott , Qiufang Ma
I-D last updated 2023-10-03
Completed reviews Dnsdir Last Call review of -12 by Scott Rose (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Rich Salz (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -14 by Scott Rose (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -15 by Ted Lemon (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -06 by Andy Bierman (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -06 by Spencer Dawkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-10-03
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Document: draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

This document defines YANG data models for Operations, Administration, and
Maintenance (OAM) & Management of ALTO. Pperators can use these data models
to set up an ALTO server, create, update and remove ALTO information resources,
manage the access control, configure server discovery, and collect statistical
data.

I like this document. It is clearly written and very well structured. I liked
the description of requirements, the information model corresponding to the
requirements, and the extension example modules in the Appendices. These are
all very useful for operators who need to understand and use the YANG modules.

Understanding and using this document requires a good knowledge of ALTO.

My review was focused on the quality and readability of the information, and 
- as I also performed an OPS-DIR early review, on the design and data modelling issues 
relevant for operations and manageability. I did not perform a YANG review, as Andy Bierman
undertook this task.

This document is Ready
Review Date: 2023-10-03
IETF LC End Date: 2023-10-06
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready

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