Telechat Review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-14
review-ietf-alto-oam-yang-14-dnsdir-telechat-rose-2023-10-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Telechat Review
Team DNS Directorate (dnsdir)
Deadline 2023-10-24
Requested 2023-10-19
Authors Jingxuan Zhang , Dhruv Dhody , Kai Gao , Roland Schott , Qiufang Ma
I-D last updated 2023-10-19
Completed reviews Dnsdir Last Call review of -12 by Scott Rose (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Rich Salz (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -14 by Scott Rose (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -15 by Ted Lemon (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -06 by Andy Bierman (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -06 by Spencer Dawkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Scott Rose
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang by DNS Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/Hxl0FHFCUD8hJmA7IfNybFNuyfo
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-10-19
review-ietf-alto-oam-yang-14-dnsdir-telechat-rose-2023-10-19-00
There does not appear to be any change to the text that relates how the DNS RRs
are to be provisioned and queried. So the review from the -12 version still
applies.  This draft does not impact the DNS protocol and is ready in that
respect.

I will note that since the text hasn't changed, the misspelled word still
exists.  In Section 5.3.1.2 "The initial version..." ends with "...server
discovery as sugested by [RFC7286] and [RFC8686]."  "sugested" should be
"suggested".

Scott