Early Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-bfd-p2p-03
review-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-bfd-p2p-03-opsdir-early-p-2026-07-09-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-bfd-p2p |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2026-07-10 | |
| Requested | 2026-06-19 | |
| Requested by | Yingzhen Qu | |
| Authors | Nitish Gupta , Aditya Dogra , Colin Docherty , Jeff Tantsura | |
| I-D last updated | 2026-08-11 (Latest revision 2026-08-11) | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir Early review of -03
by Michael P
(diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang (diff) Secdir Early review of -03 by Paul Wouters (diff) |
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| Comments |
Preparation for WGLC. |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Michael P |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Early review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-bfd-p2p by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/gC_sGdTciHUUGNc_XymPTK89kQc | |
| Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 05) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2026-07-09 |
review-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-bfd-p2p-03-opsdir-early-p-2026-07-09-00
Hi, I have been selected as the Operational Directorate (opsdir) reviewer for this Internet-Draft. The Operational Directorate reviews all operational and management-related Internet-Drafts to ensure alignment with operational best practices and that adequate operational considerations are covered. A complete set of _"Guidelines for Considering Operations and Management in IETF Specifications"_ can be found at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5706bis/. While these comments are primarily for the Operations and Management Area Directors (Ops ADs), the authors should consider them alongside other feedback received. - Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-bfd-p2p-03 - Reviewer: Michael P - Review Date: 2026-07-09 - Intended Status: Standards Track --- ## Summary Choose one: - Has Nits: This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that should be considered prior to publication. --- Thank you for the effort that has gone into this document and for including an Operational Considerations section. This document is well written, with samples being particularly useful to readers and explains the motivation and solution well. A minor suggestion is to include brief definitions, similar to the introduction of RFC 9568, to help new readers. Similarly, while it contains an Operational Considerations, I'd suggest slightly more detail. For example, "desirable not to interface VRRP with BFD for determining the health of VRRP Active" could include the reasoning behind this suggestion specifically. I also think it's worth highlighting the extensive Operational Issues section in RFC 9568 and Operational Considerations in RFC 5880, even just as pointers as they are relevant here too. These are not strictly necessary as RFC 9568 and RFC 5880 are normative references, but I think it would help.