Telechat Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-13
review-ietf-opsawg-sap-13-rtgdir-telechat-chen-2023-01-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-13
Requested revision 13 (document currently at 15)
Type Telechat Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2023-01-18
Requested 2023-01-09
Requested by Robert Wilton
Authors Mohamed Boucadair , Oscar Gonzalez de Dios , Samier Barguil , Qin Wu , Victor Lopez
I-D last updated 2023-01-17
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -02 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Mach Chen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Ivaylo Petrov (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -13 by Mach Chen (diff)
Yangdoctors Telechat review of -13 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Comments 
The RTGDIR review was of -04 (perhaps during WG LC, but before IETF LC), and the review as marked as "Has Issues".   Would it be possible to please see if Mach Chen can check the diff against -13 to determine if the issues raised have been addressed.

Regards,
Rob
Assignment Reviewer Mach Chen
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-opsawg-sap by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/MmY6jTJluUa8XLaH4K98PrwzrnM
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 15)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-01-17
review-ietf-opsawg-sap-13-rtgdir-telechat-chen-2023-01-17-00
Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see
​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would
be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call
comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by
updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-13
Reviewer: Mach Chen
Review Date: 2023/1/17
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary:
No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments:
This document is clearly written and easy to read.
I have reviewed version 04 of this document, and my comments have been
addressed.

Major Issues:
No major issues found.

Minor Issues:
No minor issues found.

Nits:
No nits found.

Best regards,
Mach